Going by the Mayur Uniquoters and Vinati stock analysis, this is a good template. My worry is the quality may get diluted over time? A lot depends on those doing the interpretation of the data. But definitely a job well done, so far!
The Template can do with some improvements to make it more comprehensive:
1). Comment on Management quality - is a must? in as much as is known, and can be inferred. I checked the PAT Dorsey stock analysis template you refer to, there are several things he suggests to qualify on Management quality.
2). Known Corporate Governance issues - again a must? from published accounts, preferably quoted/linked to.
will try to think thru for other additions.